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   雅思大作文常常没有观点? 🔥欢迎大家跟着哥一起 用大作文真题进行“雅思话题实战训练”! 本次作文真题讨论话题: 犯罪类 大家可以先跳过语言关, 先用中文简单表达自己的观点, 哥在留言区等大家的评论哦~ 事不宜迟  学习时间到👇 话题分类 犯罪类 大作文题目 Some people think that most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others bel...


     雅思大作文常常没有观点?  🔥欢迎大家跟着哥一起  用大作文真题进行“雅思话题实战训练”!  本次作文真题讨论话题:  犯罪类  大家可以先跳过语言关,  先用中文简单表达自己的观点,  哥在留言区等大家的评论哦~  事不宜迟   学习时间到👇  话题分类  犯罪类  大作文题目  Some people think that most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.  题目解读  本题讨论犯罪的形成原因:大多数犯罪是贫困和其他社会问题的结果,还是因为罪犯本性不好。范文选用了中立结构,在主体段分别分析了两个观点,并给出了自己的看法  参考范文  The debate over the root causes of crime has been ongoing for decades, with two main perspectives emerging: one attributing criminal behavior to external circumstances such as poverty and social problems and the other suggesting that some people are inherently predisposed to criminality.  Those who argue that crime stems from social circumstances point to the correlation between poverty, lack of education, and unemployment. In disadvantaged communities where resources are scarce and opportunities are limited, individuals may resort to criminal activities as a means of survival or as a response to social injustices. This perspective emphasizes the importance of addressing societal inequalities and providing support systems to prevent individuals from turning to crime.  On the other hand, proponents of the notion that people are intrinsically evil argue that certain individuals possess innate traits or characteristics that predispose them to criminal behavior. According to this view, some individuals are inherently more prone to violence, impulsivity, or lack of empathy, making them more likely to engage in criminal acts regardless of their socioeconomic status or environmental factors. This perspective often draws on psychological and biological explanations to support the idea that criminal behavior is deeply rooted in an individual's nature.  In my opinion, it is essential to recognize that the causes of crime are multifaceted, often involving a combination of external factors and individual predispositions. While social conditions can undoubtedly influence behavior, not all individuals facing adversity resort to criminality, highlighting the role of personal agency and resilience. Similarly, whilst some individuals may have inherent tendencies towards antisocial behavior, environmental interventions and support systems can mitigate these tendencies and prevent criminal outcomes.  To conclude, both perspectives offer valuable insights into the complex issue of crime. Efforts to address crime should encompass tackling root causes of inequality and targeted interventions to support individuals at risk of engaging in criminal behavior.  注:杜斯讯老师原创参考范文仅供学习使用  重点词汇/语料  root causes of crime   犯罪的根本原因  attribute criminal behavior to external circumstances   将犯罪行为归因于外部环境  inherently   内在地,固有地  people are predisposed to criminality   有犯罪倾向的人们  stem from   源于  correlation between poverty, lack of education, and unemployment   贫穷、缺乏教育和失业之间的关系  disadvantaged communities   弱势群体  resources are scarce   资源稀缺  opportunities are limited   机会有限  resort to criminal activities   诉诸于犯罪活动  a means of survival or   生存或生存的手段  a response to social injustices   对社会不公的回应  address societal inequalities   解决社会不平等问题  provide support systems   提供支持系统  notion   概念  intrinsically evil   内在的邪恶  innate traits  天生的特征  be inherently more prone to violence, impulsivity, or lack of empathy   天生更倾向于暴力、冲动或缺乏同情心  engage in criminal acts   从事犯罪行为  socioeconomic status   社会经济状况  draws on psychological and biological explanations   利用心理学和生物学的解释  an individual's nature   个人的本性  multifaceted   多方面的  individual predispositions   个人倾向  adversity   逆境  highlight the role of personal agency and resilience   强调个人能动性和韧性的作用  inherent tendencies towards antisocial behavior   固有的反社会倾向  environmental interventions   环境干预措施  mitigate   缓解  prevent criminal outcomes   预防犯罪行为  valuable insights into the complex issue of crime   对犯罪这一复杂问题的宝贵见解  targeted interventions   有针对性的干预措施  individuals at risk of engaging in criminal behavior   有从事犯罪行为风险的个人  杜斯迅老师还将在下周二在视频号开启直播  为大家讲解5月的写作考情预测以及备考攻略

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